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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: October 18, 2006 at 05:19 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 413 views

~xXx~ Your Direction ~xXx~  

~xXx~ Your Direction ~xXx~

I havenít seen you strike
A bad shot yet
I havenít seen you aim
And not mark the bet.

Itís mind over matter
In matters like these,
And you are the type
Who is sure to please.

Could I have some of that?
The good stuff you possess.
I am envious of your richness
Of this I must confess.

Itís not easy living with
One so full of perfection
Never ever leave me alone,
For Iím in need of your direction.

© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved

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February 16, 2007
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wonderful i love it

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October 19, 2006
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As always an amzing piece of poetry. You write with such eloquence, passion and emotion. I always look forward to reading your work. CHeck out my new poems and update to my site. You had wrote to me and said that you seen me having a boy and two girls very soon - how soon do you see.

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October 19, 2006
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Loved this one! Well done!

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