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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: October 11, 2006 at 10:56 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Inspirational | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 388 views

To Triumph~~~  

To Triumph~~~

To do it right,
Two must hold
One another tight
Being forever bold,
Even in the face
Of controversy.

In adversityís case
To have all
Fall into place,
A humble heart
Is your saving grace,
Keeps you in the place
Of blessing.

I donít mean to say
Itís as easy
As pie,
Not I.
No way!
But I know
What feels right
And what is
Obviously wrong.
I suppose
That is the purpose
Of this song
To keep us
Strong and
Ever long.

© 8.30.06 by Iviedoe

© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved

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December 21, 2008
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This is a wonderful read, It has true meaning in your words.

HP Greg

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August 10, 2008
I enjoyed reading this piece of work. Keep on writing.... OK? Cletus Hardiman

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October 20, 2006
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i enjoyed this immensley! your ability to write the truth while drawing the reader in with not "fluff" but the reality of love and that it is not to be taken for granted; but nourished & respected.
i especially enjoy the lines of humour, as they are oh so true, and it is my pleasure to read such outstanding writing that is inspiring with a wonderful message that is truly a timeless classic.

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October 15, 2006
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AMazing, beautiful and so full of passion.

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October 12, 2006
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Very nice

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