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♥ 99 Times Outta 75 ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: November 20, 2004 at 12:06 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 374 views

99 Times Outta 75 
A cake walk
Of snake talk.
But here's the staight dope:
Just give me a listen
'bout how you been kissin'
Pissin' away your hope.
'Cos 99 times outta 75,
If your spirit is still alive-
You'll get the come-back "Nope"!
Sure I'm a little left of center,
But just cramming for thier turn to enter-
Butting up against one another,
With no compassion for their brother.
Is a blind follower how you see yourself to be?
Is that how you'd like to classify me?
Can I be healed from my deviate theory?
Believeing nothing of what I'm hearing,
And only half of what I see.
It all seems to be a movie screen,
All I've ever heard or seen-
Is blondes and models
Falling headlong into bottles.
I suppose some get stuck into-
Belonging,Coming out,
Drowning trout,
Done that and been there too!
Making the biggest mistake:
Betting that the whole cow's not at steak!!!
It's not that everyone's got a line to stand in,
But this is sure,
Everyone's got a life to land in.

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Comments & Reviews

jzachmann
March 18, 2005

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Wow, I love your poems...they create such pictures in the readers mind...keep up the good work

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Koffee
November 23, 2004

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this is so cute.. i like where u went with this.. very unique...

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Jodi
November 21, 2004

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Awesome poem. I love your use of language and composition. Well done!

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