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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: October 06, 2006 at 11:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 382 views

-oOo- The Write Words -oOo-  

-oOo- The ‘Write’ Words -oOo-

I want to express my true feelings for you
You’d like what I want to say, I just bet.
There is just one thing that I find to be wrong,
And it’s keeping me from the realization of such a song.
You see, I know not of the loveliest of words;
To describe what is within me, ever long
These I’ve not found as yet.

There are the words “serendipitous”,
And “captured” as well as “sublime” ~
Yes, yes, the immense word “intense”
And “splendid” comes close to the right kind.

Perhaps I’m in need of words only spoken
By His angels to Our God above
The language of His Heaven
The language of unconditional love.

On my knees I ask God to supply me
The way to ask the question
To receive from Him the perfect expression;
The one to define this internal extreme.
Words full of faith, honesty and love so pure,
To convey the completeness of the joy,
That I am wanting them to mean.

© 8.30.06 by Iviedoe

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April 09, 2007
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This I can relate always trying to find the right words to say...but all I have to do is look into my heart

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October 20, 2006
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beautifully written with an almost etheral quality to it. i feel a deep spiritual element as your words touch the core of my being. your words are deeply felt & lovingly expressed. i really enjoyed this poem & i thank you for sharing this most uplifting poem of the power of faith & love.

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October 07, 2006
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Again I am in awe of your work. You write so eloquently and full of emotion. If you are not a published poet already you should be. You are clearly in a class of superb poets like Frost and Whitman.

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October 07, 2006
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another good one. gr8 messages thus far. keep it up. stop by sometime and check out my site. Lp7

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