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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: September 26, 2006 at 03:07 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.59 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 405 views

-xXx- To The Point -xXx-  

-xXx- To The Point –xXx-


Juicy fruit,
You are~
So cute!
So play with
Your food~
Hottie Dude!
Squeeze me tight~
And I’ll do you right!
But Please,
Take me,
And make me first~
Then to be sure,
Let me quench my thirst!!!


© 8-30-06 by Iviedoe



© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



theheart
October 04, 2006
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very beautiful poem. with beautiful frame and subject. haha juicy fruit always healthy. wish you juicy fruit every day. sanjay


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drowning_in_you
October 02, 2006
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Excellent play on words.I see you have not lost a single step


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Katela
October 02, 2006
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A cutsie poem, very bouncy, and I lvoe the picture, it seems to fit good job


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MELONIE
September 26, 2006
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Very Cute.. Enjoyed the simplicity. Eloquent and well written.


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TempestOfNature
September 26, 2006
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yea thats to the point


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