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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: September 26, 2006 at 03:07 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.59 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 332 views

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Juicy fruit,
You are~
So cute!
So play with
Your food~
Hottie Dude!
Squeeze me tight~
And I’ll do you right!
But Please,
Take me,
And make me first~
Then to be sure,
Let me quench my thirst!!!

© 8-30-06 by Iviedoe

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theheart
October 04, 2006

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very beautiful poem. with beautiful frame and subject. haha juicy fruit always healthy. wish you juicy fruit every day. sanjay

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drowning_in_you
October 02, 2006

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Excellent play on words.I see you have not lost a single step

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Katela
October 02, 2006

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A cutsie poem, very bouncy, and I lvoe the picture, it seems to fit

good job

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MELONIE
September 26, 2006

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Very Cute.. Enjoyed the simplicity. Eloquent and well written.

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TempestOfNature
September 26, 2006

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yea thats to the point

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