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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: August 28, 2006 at 04:59 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 393 views

-xXx- An Inner Bling Thing -xXx-  

An Inner Bling Thing~~~

You've got a perfect sweetness about you,
An unexplainable sort of glow.
I so want to put it into words;
But none are worthy, that I know.

Everyone else can see it too,
So I know it's not just me.
Some react with favor, some not;
Yet you carry yourself so humbly.

It's a spark that sizzles;
An unending brand of flame.
Even if they act aloof about you,
I can tell they still want the same.

Where did you develope your persona?
In what garden did your character grow?
For I'd like to experience a piece of that;
Still keeping it real and on the down-low.

8/28/06 Iviedoe

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September 22, 2006
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Beautiful, sweet and very eloquently written.

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