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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: August 25, 2006 at 06:10 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 385 views

Just Folks...  

Just Folks~~~

Ordinary Joe,
And Ordinary Jane,
Went to the top together;
Of a hill to get insane.
The air ,
Up there~
Was still...
And steamy hot.
At the top,
Of that hill.
They did what lovers will...
And what lovers will not;
ie; get caught~
Doing the naught.
The wind mused music,
Around and thru the twosome,
That steamy heat ;
They used it;
And fused it,
Together, forever as one.
In and out,
Stirring all about.
That day the hill,
Knew loving, no doubt.
This is how,
From time to time;
They make time in the now.
Tho ordinary; Jane and Joe,
They make events sublime;
And thus so,
The extraordinary two,
Do go.

8/25/06 Iviedoe

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August 25, 2006
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Lol I lovedd it!!! This was soooo cute, defenityl voting for it!

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