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♥ Up and Arriving~~~ ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: August 25, 2006 at 12:50 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 336 views

Up and Arriving~~~ 
Up and Arriving~~~

Examining our holes~
Baring our souls,
To a higher mind of one,
To some;
Seems too much ado~
About how do you do;
But it's not a child's game to play,
It's a matter of living it day to day.

Some things should be~
After all is said and done;
Counted as dead and gone.
Some are battles completely won,
And some are absolutely lost.
For some run for a time,
From the sunshine;
Just for a fun time,
Then count the cost.

So I say;
Every dog has his day,
And this would be my way,
Of survivng~
comming up and arriving.
Giving in to:
Try to to give it all.
For the truth is,
In time great or small;
Not one thing will be left unshown.
As if looking at a mirror,
In your own eye~
With there the passion, fire, or furior;
For soul does not die,
And everyone to the other;
Shall be finally, and fully known.

8/24/06 Iviedoe

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Comments & Reviews

MaryJane
August 25, 2006

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Excellent work, greatly enjoyed

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August 25, 2006

Nice work, wonderful work, makes the reader ponder.. -karis

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