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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: August 18, 2006 at 03:37 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 393 views

~~Her Spirit Hears It~~  

Make your girl believe today,
That she is the woman for your eyes.
Hold nothing sensuous from your love;
Silky, soft, moist, and perfectly sized.

Preserve your eyes for only her.
Just as she quickens only for you..
Set your world to revolve around her,
As tho it is made for just you two.

Why look with lust at others?
Look here, what you have is so fine.
What ever you'd like, she'd love to do,
why crush her spirit and state of mind?

Please don't turn away to lust after another,
Do you really want her to hold it in, though concieve,
That she was never the soulmate you swear she is?
Your behavior is very telling, and dictates all she can believe.

Would not your own heart burn with sorrow inside?
I believe these goings on, would crush your spirit too;
Should she take the actions that make the strides,
To heat her up first, in order to deal with you.

Let she be the one you show your lust after.
Then she may understand that you are her beau alone.
Keep your eyes locked in lust at no other but her.
Be secure in your sexuality, and show her she is the only one.

8/18/2006 Iviedoe

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August 23, 2006
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Touching piece, so very profound and eloquently writtern.

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August 23, 2006
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Eloquently, emotioanl and majesticly written. I loved this poem.. IT is so touching and heart felt.

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August 20, 2006
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This was really good! Excellent!

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August 18, 2006
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woh that is like soooo cool a very nice write indeed

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