Profile Home My Writing About Me Latest News
Message Me Members Area Writers-Network Upgrade to PRO

A Poem by RobertRonnow


Author: RobertRonnow
Created: January 22, 2017 at 05:27 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Writing | General/Other
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 136 views

Long As You're Living

Quiet morning.
Successful surgery.

No tv!
Watch weather.

Do nothing.
Be nameless.

Suppose cows.
Scare crows.

Harmless habits.
Armless robot.

Like a delusion.
A late night movie.

Expect to forget
and be forgotten. Information.

Interstate.
Toilet seat.

How soon after cryogenesis
can one cry or ejaculate?


© RobertRonnow - all rights reserved

Author Notes


www.ronnowpoetry.com


 
The author would love to hear your feedback but you must be logged in to do that. If you are a member of Writers-Network click here to login and review this writing entry.

Not a member? Not a problem! You can register here, it's free for everyone

Comments & Reviews



Archia
February 28, 2017
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
This is interesting. There's probably a lot more to it than I see when I read it and I think it's very open to interpretation. Some of the lines seemed a bti random but I liked the ending, I think it did help tie things together a bit more and it made it seem more like an overall poem. It's a very interesting poem to read adn think about.


There are no comments on this review.




      

Authors, Share Your Book with Millions of Readers






Sponsored Ads By Members



   Writers-Network.com was granted non-exclusive rights to display this work
   All poetry, stories, columns, and other member contributions are owned solely by the poster
   © Writers-Network.com - All Rights Reserved
   Get Your Free Poetry Site!  |  Read Todays' Poems  |  Upgrade to PRO  |  Writing Community