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♥ --Epiphany-- ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: August 08, 2006 at 02:32 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 263 views
--Epiphany-- 
--Epiphany--

Today I had an epiphany,
I realized my blessings are full.
There is nothing that I am lacking in,
And my life is beautiful.

Oh say it is oh so, so true;
There's never been anyone like me!
Maybe a flower or two;
Or a big old red oak tree.

And God broke the mold ,
When he made you as well;
Your looks, your character,
Your sweet, sweet smell.

So, let's take this world by storm!
Let's make it happen for you and me!
Let's be one of a kind; the two of us!
Let's forsake freedom for pure Liberty!!!

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CaroDreams4u
April 29, 2012

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This is so sweet
this actually reminds me of some of my own pieces.Simple and lovely message here. BW44
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MELONIE
August 23, 2006

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Touching piece, so very profound and eloquently writtern. Mere words cannot describe the beauty of your writing - they would pale in comparrison..
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melissa
August 08, 2006

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Your so amazing, loved it!!! Brought my spirits up!
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ShortyJewlz
August 08, 2006

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awwwwwww! How sweet. Nice write! -shortyjewlz
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TempestOfNature
August 08, 2006

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this sounds dreamy yet sincere and i love it thats how i feel about my bf keep writing Ivie never let the pen ink dry..
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