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♥ ~Hear The Echo~ ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: August 08, 2006 at 07:03 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 278 views
~Hear The Echo~ 
Hear The Echo

Some things are easy to believe,
And other I have trouble to concieve.
It's times like this that make me wonder;
Should I shout out loud or just sit and ponder?

I know I can't make it work all by myself.
Should I cry for help from this rusty shelf?
And just what would I say if I said it out loud?
For I am here all alone in this dusty old crowd...

No, it's not a game, this one on one;
It's a matter of compliance that must be done.
When there are circumstances that must be travailed,
Then there are situations that just can't be bailed; or veiled.

Come hither; come on, come to me!
Come quickly; come, don't go; come, let's be!
So just don't ever go quietly, or softly slip away;
Let's just stay defiantly and keep us aloft anyway!

Say it louder, so I can hear you;
Play it with feeling, like you used to.
Say it proud; and hear the echo,
That you love me, love me, oh so!

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MELONIE
August 23, 2006

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Touching piece, so eloquently writtern and such great emotion expressed. Your words flow like satin ribbins on soft bare skin and your rythym as strong as a beating heart. I am in awe of you.
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melissa
August 08, 2006

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Excellent poem!
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TempestOfNature
August 08, 2006

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i can relate to this all to well am so freakin' loving this poem Ivie it's been a while since i seen your work got to catch up on yea...
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Leopassion7
August 08, 2006

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love the concept here. great job thx for sharing and keep up the great work.
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