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♥ ~~Dancing For You~~ ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: August 04, 2006 at 05:40 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments 289 views

~~Dancing For You~~ 
~~Dancing For You~~

Every moment that
We breathe as one,
Is like leaping off of
A cliff over the ocean,
And taking flight
Through the sun's rays.

Sleeping as close as
Two could possibly be,
Is like breathing as one.
And I dream of dancing
For you, I take flight
Over the ocean's blue haze.

Dancing for you,
So sensuously and lithe,
Is like taking flight
Over an ocean cliff.
Moving like the water,
I as well observe your ways.


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MELONIE
August 23, 2006

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Wonderful poem, it is a beautiful way to describe love and passion.

Excellent flow and rhthym.. A precious gem of a masterpiece.. You have a wonderful gift and those who read your work are blessed to be shown that part of your soul.

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MELONIE
August 23, 2006

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Wonderful poem, it is a beautiful way to describe love and passion.

Excellent flow and rhthym.. A precious gem of a masterpiece.. You have a wonderful gift and those who read your work are blessed to be shown that part of your soul.

There are no comments on this review.






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