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Last Confession

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Author: Mystique

Created: August 03, 2006 at 09:00 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 353 views

Last Confession

It seems the world is against us
I don’t know the reason why
History keeps repeating itself
But why do I have to fall every single time?

Now you’re starting to get cold
And it’s giving me the chills
You must’ve gotten tired of everything
You just don’t want to go on like this

I’m shattered by your actions
Devastated by what they mean
Yet I’ll keep my mouth shut
Try to be dense of what’s happening

My last confession is that ---
Though we can never be
Once in my life, I really hoped
There could’ve been you and me

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Comments & Reviews

Brokenverses
August 04, 2006

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I like this poem alot, it reminds me alot of my stuff, good job and keep it up

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nathebrat
August 04, 2006

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Great write.

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Leopassion7
August 03, 2006

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very sad and so beautiful. O, I just love when I can 'feel' the poem. thx for sharing and keep it up.

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