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A Prose by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: February 13, 2016 at 05:18 am
Upload Type: Prose, G (All)  
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Trust comes first in a vision of life
mid'st confusion and sometimes strife.

Where would you place it or where would 
              you rather it be >>>
< on the receiving end of a circus act >>
< on the other side of a trapeze.
< on the ground of a summersault
     when the diver cannot see.
< in the blindspot of a cricketers bat 
     when he strives for a century.
< in the way of  a racing driver's path
     when he does the Grand Pri.

So many scenarios can be envisioned
     that calls for 'Trust' you see.
Who do you trust at the helm of a ship
     when a storm is brewing at sea?
Well who do you trust in the line of fire
    when those skis are pointed at you
When the ball is headed for you at the 
   speed of a hundred and three!

Where do you go when a human cannon 
               is surely aimed for you?
What do you do when the surgeon's blade
               is delved inside?
Well whom do you trust if he is intent on
              removing a spleen he cannot see?
Well who to trust will depend  entirely on you or me!

Created @ 7.00AM Saturday 13th February 2016

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Thoughts running through one's head that are relevant to life.

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Comments & Reviews

February 18, 2016
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True enough in a way. I myself do not trust easily at all. Who to trust is a personal choice that can not always be easy to decide. In a way the word "trust" can almost be replaced by the word "faith" but it is slightly different. As you indicated at the end of this piece who we trust in is our decision right or wrong. Thanks for sharing

In this day and age it is difficult "P" to know who to 'trust' as the ones you 'trust' most are the ones who ultimately let you down. Best I think to keep and open mind and be cautious always!. May sound corny but My God is the only being I can safely say that I can put my 'trust' in and then the sceptics will probably rule - there is no proof that God exists but if you have been on the receiving end of the' unexplain - ables' you will know!

 kitty replied on February 19, 2016

Oh, "P" please forgive my haste. Thank you for your much valued opinion, my friend! Have you a  warm and sunny day!

 kitty replied on February 19, 2016

February 14, 2016
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I put my trust in the Lord like you obviously do. Good thoughts. good poem. You truly are a child of God

I'd like to think so , my friend. Thank you so much for a lovely review and for expressing so clearly your point of view.  Blessings!

 kitty replied on February 14, 2016


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