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A Poem by RobertRonnow


Author: RobertRonnow
Created: November 01, 2015 at 10:13 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Writing | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 183 views

Absolutely Smooth Mustard  

There is absolutely nothing to do. Some people
fall in love. I go have a cheese sandwich
with mustard. Watch skyscraper lights from
the bed. Look at the books and decide to read
none of the dry words. The cheese sandwich is
good, and orange juice. It's cold in the kitchen
so I go back to bed even though it's Spring.

Some people go dancing in fish net stockings.
They find a good time--but exactly what this means--
it's not more important than a star. Quite
what is this waiting. Tonight I could disappear
and the world might not miss me until next year.
I remember passionate nights with some of the women
I've known. Two sides of a smooth stone.


Last Modified: November 01, 2015 at 10:45 am
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shar1968
November 01, 2015
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A fine poem
Theme of the poem is simple and words are matching. Presentation is effective, clear and stanza wise. The poet has selected words carefully and it is smooth. The poet’s simplicity of thought is apparent, however poem is accurate. A fine poem.


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