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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 20, 2006 at 09:17 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 417 views

Closer, Closer~~  

Closer Closer~~~

I paid 25 cents to see a dancing poodle sing
You should have been there to hear such a thing !
It cost me a dollar to ride the flaming merry go round,
You should've been there to see it burn to the ground!
I shelled out 50 whole dollars to see at cobra the zoo,
I wish you'd been there to eat the damn thing; you mongoose you!!!

So, where are you now?
It's been awhile
Since you've come around.
To and fro,
I hear your footsteps sound.
Nearer, nearer, please to me~~
Closer, closer, To feel and see;
Just how amazing we two,
Could the real, really be.

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July 29, 2006
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Whoa, an intresting poem to say the leaset, I liked the begening, good write

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