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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 19, 2006 at 01:51 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 400 views

~~You Got It Like That~~  

~~You Got It Like That~~

You are the most
Fantastic person these eyes
Have ever seen.
Tho it should be no surprise,
For my heart
Has never been
So captured and stunned
All at once.
And so right away.
I get all sweaty and dizzy
When you look my way.
You got it like that,
With me it seems.
It was hard at first
To know what
All of this means.
Until I gave in,
To your
Masculine charms.
I fell in head first,
Into your very
Strong arms.
After that,
It's been like this,
I look at you,
And find sheer BLISS!

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July 20, 2006
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Perfect beautiful, loved it!

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July 20, 2006
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I really liked this one, and nice art with your poetry! -sj

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July 19, 2006
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seems like the first love

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