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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 19, 2006 at 11:53 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 375 views

~Something To See~  

~~Something to See~~

I can't help but ask myself;
"Just how blessed can one person be?"
What with you in my life,
Making it big, like something to see.

You have made my water into wine,
youhave made my molehill into a mountain;
Because of you, my worries seem sublime,
And my small creek is now a living fountain!

What you've done for my life is imense,
And the expanse of the breadth is this:
Unlike anything I've ever seen or sensed.
So this must be what the sages call Bliss.

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June 22, 2008
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oh my I adore it one of your finestpoems I like the molehill to mountain saying , truly this person is a blessing to your life

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July 19, 2006
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Ooooo this was amazing! Loved it!!! God bless you!

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