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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 19, 2006 at 11:50 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 343 views

~You're Pretty Smart~~  

~~You're Pretty Smart~~

Into the ocean
Of your eyes I fall,
With my eyes
Saucer sized.
No longer am I small.
No, you make me,
And my life into a
Huge blanket
Of comfort and warmth.
You are my;
My Love,
My surity.
With purity
Of heart,
I say :
You're pretty smart,
To have a girl
Such as I;
Who knows that,
She's got,
The best ever Guy!

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July 20, 2006
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thats nice-sj

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July 20, 2006
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He is one lucky man with such a beautiful poet to love him.

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July 19, 2006
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Awww I adore this poem, this was magical! lol! Absolutely loved it, and I love that picture!!! Excellent work, your very gifted!

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