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A Poem by JeffGlovsky

Author: JeffGlovsky
Created: February 13, 2015 at 05:49 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | General/Other | Writing
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 274 views


I'll start it!
I'll start the dance!
Fish twist and wish
to be connected.  Primal
tappings into something longing
as the two of us.

Sustained piss shiver, poison throat,
and need.  Quake, flop
and sway a little...Heed the drum
and feed the Hunger
flaming up your

Last Modified: February 13, 2015 at 06:06 pm
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February 13, 2015
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Hello my is Timmie, it is a pleasure to meet you. This is the first piece of your writing that I have gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you for sharing. This is a strange one indeed, my friend. To be honest, I am not really quite sure what the second stanza means. If you have time, I would love to hear your interpretation. I hope I have not offended you, as that would never be my intention. I am honestly curious. Take care and I shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the near future.

Hey Timmie - I was in the bathroom with a sore throat when I wrote the 2nd verse.  Thanks for reading!

 JeffGlovsky replied on February 13, 2015

thank you so much for your clarification.  Been there, done that LOL

 ThePriestess replied on February 13, 2015


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