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♥ ~~little wants~~ ♥

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Author: iviedoeloves

Created: June 24, 2006 at 10:17 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 288 views

~~little wants~~

i want to be the fishy's in your sea,
i want to be the chicken in your soup~
i want to be the yellow in your corn,
i want to be the turbo in your coupe...

i want to be the hot coals in your b.b.q.,
i want to be the eagle in your game~
i want to be the green in your grass,
i want to be the girl you give your last name...

i want to be the taste in your meal,
i want to be the bow in your loops~
i want to be the sun in your shine,
i want to be the jumps thru your hoops...

i want to be the swagger in your walk,
i want to be the bubble in your gum~
i want to be the reason for your rhyme,
i want to be the total of your sum.

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TempestOfNature
June 28, 2006

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i have a lot of little wants by i barly express them towards him...keep writing Ivie

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lovelydays
June 25, 2006

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how sweet! i loved it

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lynnmarie
June 24, 2006

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wow! i am still laughing!! great subject and so very very well written. a truly delightful read!
lynn

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