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A Poem by Leopassion7


Author: Leopassion7
Created: July 20, 2014 at 08:36 am
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Love | Contemporary | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 81 views

Breathless  

A whisper.
Fallen leaves and windless trees
my heart skipped, I held my breath.
He sauntered forward--my anticipation acknowledged
as I licked my lips, awaiting his approach.
Seemingly pleased, he grew closer and closer.
A bead of sweat trickled down the small of my back:
the heat of summer punctuating its presence--I hardly noticed.
Motionless I stood, my loins afire with fervor;
so close now was he.
Breathlessly...
I wait


2014 S.K. Wright


© Leopassion7 - all rights reserved


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a112yearoldman
July 20, 2014
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Laid beautifully
into place, drawing the reader in to the "breathless" emotion!


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