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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: June 14, 2006 at 02:43 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 387 views


While being in your arms,
You hold me so soundly~
I am spellbound by your charms,
Listening to you speak profoundly.

"Hey, Doll Face you're my baby~
My person of absolute choice."
You completely command my attention,
When it's love you convey in your voice.

So coerce me when you are speaking,
To do as exactly as you say~
While I swim in the sea of your eyes,
At once I swoon and then I sway.

And please cling to me with your heart,
As you know that I absolutely do yours~
I want to be held in your arms forever,
Let's spend our lives together being ours.

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June 14, 2006
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absolutely stunning!
the flow is seamless and the message beautiful.
lovely to read with a perfect title too.

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