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A Prose by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: May 20, 2014 at 03:20 am
Upload Type: Prose, T (13+)  
Category: Fantasy | Romance | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 7 users with 7 comments and 430 views



Devoid of love
The body seeks to destruct.

It enters in a mode of self denial
The heart begins to rust – crumble like dust.

Touch this heart – give it back
The strength to live.
Feel the pulse – it struggles to survive
And death is feared no more.

You alone the powerhouse of strength,
The driving force, the catalyst of life....

Can revive this heart that bleeds for you
One more chance to live this life again!

Take away the sorrow and the pain
My inspiration and my muse,
Come on now, do not be obtuse.

‘Oh sola mia, mi amore’
Come on out of that romantic dream.

Fulfill this desire for coffee with cream
Come on now, don’t be selfish, don’t be mean
Prove you know that life is not all it seems.

Created @ 8.45 PM Monday 19th May 2014

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

The author does not speak Italian. In quote is exactly as my muse has dictated. Corrections welcome!

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Comments & Reviews ( X 15)

May 31, 2014
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Kitty you have such a lovely and heartwarming way with words.. This piece sparkles!! Caro

Hi Caro! been away for a sabbatical. Been inspired. Will post some 'simple' ones as I am working on something else for radio. Thanks for the amazing generosity of points as I will need some for posting.> like your new portrait. Stars good so are the guys. Take good care!

 kitty replied on June 14, 2014

May 25, 2014
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Coffee with cream
Expertly written, with great emotion and desire to be.!

From a person who knows! Thank you for your generosity in points also for the stars and cheery lads

 kitty replied on May 25, 2014

May 22, 2014
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The Italian line-nice touch-and a fine gentle rant-ideal start for me to read this morning-
well done sl.

Hi George! In good old fashioned English at 10.AM (GB time)! The Italian is fake Wished I could speak other languages! Thanks for so graciously pointing me and awarding stars and for of course sending those happy fellas to cheer up the slightly dull day. Have a bright and sunny day where ever you are.

 kitty replied on May 22, 2014

May 20, 2014
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The thought of loving someone and being loved back means so much to our hearts and U have such a way of saying that.....

Thanks for visiting and for gifting me so generously. Those stars and fellas look good too! Your kind review is much appreciated. Have a lovely sun shiney day.

 kitty replied on May 21, 2014

May 20, 2014
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The Strength to Change
We have this need to love and be loved, Kitty, and even when we see ourselves on the losing end of what some perceive as a game, we can turn things around. You enunciate this fact so very well, and with such a unique rhythm and flow that fit this write perfectly. That we can effect a positive change should bring us joy, and so this write certainly does bring to my heart joy, Ma'am. A beautiful telling...Spotlight worthy, to be sure.

So many on here have loved and lost - I feel their pain and then again sometimes we have to laugh at/with life and what it dishes out. Thank you Richard for a very fine review, points, stars and those fellas.Have a lovely evening.

 kitty replied on May 20, 2014

May 20, 2014
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Interesting style
It is almost free verse yet there is some internal rhyming occasionally which I like. This is a sad poem where love is absent and seems to be having a detrimental affect, it seems as if the heart will open up and flourish if it is just given the chance. Really liked the style of this piece and I'm really pleased to see someone else from England on here....Chris

On the page is as it comes straight from my muse. That is why i very rarely alter the original except for doing a spell check. The style I put on page is my own - mixed up at times but readers have to know that I have had no formal training. Pleasure writes. Thanks for your kind and frank review. Hopefully I will learn from it!

 kitty replied on May 20, 2014

May 20, 2014
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We Are The Dream Warriors
A call of/for arms? Ones to wrap around ya? I'd give you a temporary hug, but I just cant reach ya!! Just keep searching, Mr. Wonderful shall one day appear. Thanks for sharing, Dear Kitty! SL!! ~Andy

Purely poetic form/write. Hug would be nice though. Not searching. Happy in my own company - safer! Thanks my 'friend' for a kind review accompanied by stars and clappy guys! Have a great evening

 kitty replied on May 20, 2014

Ya right! Whatever you say, Sweet Kitty! Whatever you say!! lol Man, ur guyses day goes way to fast. Its only 1:40 here, ur already in the evening time. Well, have a nice evening, Lonesome Dove! Hugs!! ~Andy

 andycapped replied on May 20, 2014

U R awful but I like You! Will chek U lata!

 kitty replied on May 20, 2014


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