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A Poem by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: May 11, 2014 at 03:24 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Emotional | Free Verse | Inspirational
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments and 338 views



Through the darkest night and brightest day.
I need you now to calm my fears
and in my corner stay.

The road grows rough, the soil is tough
I cannot find my way.
Take me through the mire and dust.

My eyes grow dim - I cannot see,
Just need that hand to steady me!

My steps they falter- not sure now
which is the way as myriad of choices
are placed before me today.

Grant now my lord, the safest path
to take - to follow thee.
My only hope is to gather thoughts and pray.

You give me faith, keep darkest nights at bay.
Assurances now are loud and strong
That you will stay with me today.

Created @ 7.20 AM Sunday 11th May 2014

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

In your darkest hour - turn to your creator.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

June 25, 2015
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I like all words you used.... in my everyday leaving i need God to stay with me cause i am nothing without HIM...inspiring poems... thank you for sharing this piece of art... ...

Thank you 'Iha' for dropping by to review this humble piece. Sometimes we have to acknowledge the fact that there is a greater source to whom we should pay homage. The points are useful. thanks. The other gifts will cheer me through the day.

 kitty replied on June 25, 2015

June 08, 2014
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Your words took me somewhere else
Where we are never truly alone, stay
strong and thank you so much for sharing
this stunning write take care trudawnx

Thank you for a lovely review, my friend. A pleasure to come back from a not so good two weeks away and get such reassuring comments. Stay blessed. thank you kindly for points, stars and those happy guys!

 kitty replied on June 14, 2014

May 15, 2014
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Simply gud..
So .. serene. .
Luv it

Your visit to my humble page is much appreciated. Thanks for point,stars and happy chappie. Do have a wonderful day!

 kitty replied on May 15, 2014

May 11, 2014
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Thanks Rita for dropping in.Point and fellas most welcome.

 kitty replied on May 11, 2014

May 11, 2014
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More good work from you!

You're OK yourself! Thanks for the compliment, my friend! Have a good night!

 kitty replied on May 11, 2014

May 11, 2014
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I'm not really a religious man,but this is one beauty of a write,Kitty. I really do like it a lot,and everyone should have faith in something. Especially in something positive!

Spot on LKJ! Glad you liked this quickly drawn up piece. I find the flow's there if I don't dither. Your gracious review is most welcome. Thanks for dropping in and for the stars. Have a lovely day

 kitty replied on May 11, 2014

You have a great day too,and you're welcome!

 LonelyKingJames replied on May 11, 2014


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