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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 27, 2006 at 07:46 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 401 views

Promises and Homages  

***Promises and Homages***

Roses and poseys
In the Pumkin Pie Patch...
Your love feels like nothing else
Just so ultra fine~
You are a wonderful person to know
As well as the ultimate catch!
So promise me you will never say
We have no more time.

Promise me to be forever
Just us two as one~
Let me hold your heart, your body
And your spirit too,
I promise to show you just how well
My hot sweet Honey Bun...
That I can and will keep them
Safe and secure for you!

With every breath I'm wanting and needing
Your pleasure, happiness and grace~
For you are my lover,my confidant
And my best ever friend...
So I can't help but to watch
Your perfectly beautiful face~
While taking my love home to you
Until death causes time to end.

© iviedoeloves - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews

June 08, 2006
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The poem is beautiful, a true promise and a homage, the rhyming threw me off a couple times (But then again, i am easly thrown) very good write, i enjoyed it

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