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A Prose by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: February 06, 2014 at 01:36 pm
Upload Type: Prose, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 363 views



Yours to reason why - see how it affects me.

Yours to do or die - I see your gallantry.

Yours to always seek - I wonder why you pursued me.

Yours to find in me - that which protects me.

Yours to feel the pain - of losing yet again

a tender, caring heart.

But who protects me now?

Reason will resound the effects of rationality.

In thinking about the whys and wherefore's.

In a life full of opportunities, chances are that

we miss out on chances we should have took

always playing safely by the book!

Created @ 1.40 AM on the 25th December 2013

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

We sometimes reflect and wonder why we didn't do things, see things differently in life. We miss out on better opportunities that came our way.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 11)

June 30, 2014
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All I feel when I read this mind blowing piece
Is tenderness . Beautifully wrote as always
Thank you for sharing take care Trudawn x

Your appraisal of this humble piece is very encouraging. Thank you very much for being so generous with the points stars and fellas. The pleasure is mine.

 kitty replied on June 30, 2014

Your truly welcome I think you're poetry is wonderful
Take care x

 Trudawn replied on June 30, 2014

February 10, 2014
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Purely fictional???
Ms Kitty, I'm pretty sure that at sometime in our lives we have all reflected about something that we did or did not do and wish that we had done things differently.

... and yes, we can assume that we have missed out on some opportunities but then again we might have missed out on exactly the opposite. We should just keep an open mind and accept the decisions that we've made in our lives and make the best of what we have (but then, look at whose talking) ... for I know that I have made some decisions in life that I now regret (good and bad) ... but life does go on.

Kitty, thanks so much for sharing this nicely worded message that we should all take to heart ... and it should be in the SL.

Take care, have a restful evening and a enjoy a wonderful week my dear friend.

Blessings and hugs being sent your way ...

- heavenscentgirl1

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February 07, 2014
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I Should Of MetU YearsAgo
That is so true. We do miss judge many things in life. Some good, some bad. And they say, "we learn from our mistakes" That to can be a two way street. This was great piece, Kitty. Your wisdom is poetically plentiful. Thanks for sharing it!! SL!! ~Andy

Shucks Andy. You do make me blush! Just bringing to the page and reflecting what I think other readers might want to say. Purely fictitional. Thanks for the compliment though. Embraced - gladly! Thanks for the valued points and for those happy fellas.Have a good day now!

 kitty replied on February 07, 2014

 andycapped replied on February 07, 2014

February 06, 2014
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I love the questions you are willing to ask. And the answers you are honest in giving. We also have to remember that things could have gone worse at times. Awesome Kitty!! SL nomination from me!!

This is my writers mind at work trying to say what others dare not but want to ask. Purely fictitional. Desired effect! Thanks for a lovely review. Those fellas look good!

 kitty replied on February 07, 2014

February 06, 2014
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How very true
you wrote this well , the what if's in life second glances or second chances , well done..

He who hesitates looses all. Thanks for your visit and kind appraisal. Have a good day.

 kitty replied on February 07, 2014


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