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♥ ~I Just Can't Help It~ ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: May 22, 2006 at 08:48 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.2 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 333 views

~I Just Can't Help It~ 
~I Just Can't Help It~


I'll write and I write because I'm right~
about you, because of you, with you and for you.
I implore you, understand, I adore you.
I dream and I dream and I cream.
About you, because of you with you and for you
What does this mean? It means I adore you.
How can I say things so that you'll understand?
I just can't help it, your my kind of man.

It just tears me apart when you walk out that door,
To go to work or even to the store,
I'm a wimp I know, all washed up on shore.
I want to put a zipper over your heart,
Just for beginners in an effort to start.
So I can be your rider there,
I know it's close and personal,
And I'll keep it from tears or tear.

Your so rugged and masculine,
Yet demure and discrete,
With your strength and your brains,
Your the kind of man to meet.
How can I say these things so that you'll understand?,
I just can't help it, your my kind of man.



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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

drowning_in_you
June 14, 2006

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Nice work Ivie.You have always had strength as a writer of love poems and alike

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TempestOfNature
June 10, 2006

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i love this one too shows how much you love your man...

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Katela
June 08, 2006

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Just zips along doesn't it? my mind was reeling when I finshed, a new rhyming techneek- (Yeah right, like i am going to learn how to spell that word) a very good poem, full of energy and a nice healthy does of......well......energy. A fast paced poem, a great job!

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MaryJane
May 23, 2006

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Loved it!!!

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joycereyes
May 23, 2006

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I like your running script. Not many people write like this. Good job!

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