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Author: kitty
Created: October 03, 2013 at 03:47 am
Upload Type: Other Type, G (All)  
Category: Advice | General/Other | Opinion
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 9 users with 11 comments and 535 views



You can do it, when inspired
At the right time when desired.

Take a task, any task .....
Fix your mind on your desire,
see if it sets your heart on fire!

Make that plan, any one ...
You know you darn well can!

The road to success is ...
Never smooth, It's full of drudgery.

But with steely heart and mind ...
The pathway's clear for you to see
the bends and corners you may find.

Have confidence in what ...
Your saviour's planned for you.

His way is true and kind...
A fine reward's awaiting there
have courage, patience - peace of mind.

Created @ 7.50am Friday !5th February 2008

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Written for a friend who was in doubt. Taken from my dusty archives.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 19)

September 19, 2015
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Boy! Did I need this today! So skillfully written with a bouncy cadence and fine rhyming... and such an inspirational message! Well done my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

Thanks for bringing these thoughts back to me Keith. Been in a contemplative mood just and even though these are my words I had forgotten the true significance for a moment or two. Your friendship and support at this time means so much. Thanks for that shoulder. Thanks to for being so generous with points I know are so valuable to you for posting your meaningful writes. 

 kitty replied on September 19, 2015

January 23, 2015
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Hi kitty, yes when you put your mind to it in a very positive way, and as you say with a steely heart and determination. The mind is a complex organ. When I was going through my severe depression I was very low in confidence and lost hope and believe on myself. But with the right help I got through it and got my life back, thank you for sharing your positive poetry with me. I hope if someone who I feeling down reads this poetry and it will possible help to lift them up. Take care dear friend from D

The way to do it my friend. No use putting on a cloak of self pity...that doesn't help one bit. You have to pull yourself up by the scruff of the neck  and spur yourself on. Thank you for being so generous with points. You really shouldn't but thanks all the same. U R a  !

 kitty replied on January 23, 2015

October 22, 2014
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the read Kitty. Many of us need help In getting through life but we will never ask for It. Your Inspiration here makes me feel that I can still do It alone, don't just give In. Believe, keep walking forward. The last time I read this I decided to follow the words and I did move forward. I went Into this writing big time. I actually thought I had left a comment then. These words flow wisely off the page Kitty. SL. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

So grateful to you Mick for reading and commenting on this one. Thanks ever so much for points, stars and fellas! Enjoy your day/night!

 kitty replied on October 22, 2014

May 02, 2014
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Thank you Kitty
I read this and immediately took it on board. In my present down mode it made me realise that whatever else is going on there is still a way to win. A really meaningful poem Kitty, I reckon you should take up being an agent. Good advice and taken to heart. Thank you. SL and please accept 10 points. Rod.

You are so kind my friend! The points machine keeps giving my much needed points away - more than what I've pressed! Look at whats said by you above and how many are recorded! Thanks anyway for a kind review. Weather says siesta time for me! Overcast down here. Happy fellas keeps me cheered!. Have a good evening. Hope it's sunny where you are!

 kitty replied on May 02, 2014

January 18, 2014
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A very motivational and inspiring piece Kitty, well done! Yes in life anything is possible we must just work and believe strongly we are capable of anything! An amazing piece you have here Kitty please write more like this.

Read one of the young writers on here and searched the archives to find this one for her. Thanks again for points and words of encouragement. Friends like you are well meaning and rare!

 kitty replied on January 18, 2014

November 07, 2013
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This is truly inspiring. It seems to me that so many people give up so easily. This is well and strongly written, with a very much needed message.

Sort of agony aunt head put on here. Some need that extra push - size 6 UK boots right there! Thanks for your support here, for the points and for clappy hands. Most grateful..

 kitty replied on November 07, 2013

October 21, 2013
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Good advice there Kitty. Loved this Thanks for sharing. ,,,Rose

You see that a friend is down. You do your best to boost their morale. Thanks for a kind feedback Rose.

 kitty replied on October 21, 2013

October 19, 2013
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Thank you so much for the two points on my kitty poem. lol. This is wonderful, I love your words of inspiration!! ~jennifer

Words of encouragement, words of care are always welcome here - on WN Thanks for your kind words.

 kitty replied on October 21, 2013

My pleasure and nice to get to know you Kitty.

 PureHope replied on October 21, 2013

October 09, 2013
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I always encourage people to move forward, forget the past and reach for the mark. You have placed faith ahead of self and I truly believe whatever the mind of man can believe it can achieve, positive not negative energy is a gift from God. Thank you for sharing the light with us your readers. Well done.

Thanks for your visit and kind review. It's worked for me so it can work for anyone. I like your writes.Have a good day!

 kitty replied on October 09, 2013

October 05, 2013
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I love dusty archive writes and I have been known to share a few of my own. What wonderful heart touching encouragement for a friend in need. I seem to be a real title browser when I come to your page but this one deserves the SL so it will get SL from me. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend my friend. Blessings, Lesa

Thank you my dear friend. You have a certain sincerity in your heart and mind. Glad to know you, Lesa. Blessings to you and yours!

 kitty replied on October 06, 2013

I am starting a catch up visit with you and clicked on this one and realized I had seen this but I enjoyed again. Very sound, loving advice given here dear Kitty. Hugs

 Aspiring_Angel3 replied on November 06, 2013

Thank you for maintaining interest in my humble pieces. Do have a pleasant night. Kisses for you and family.

 kitty replied on November 06, 2013

October 03, 2013
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liked very much
Positive thinking is always the best way Kitty, a good message in your poem today...

Thanks Stella for popping in and for your kind review. Have a good day!

 kitty replied on October 03, 2013


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