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A Poem by DeepLoversPoet

Author: DeepLoversPoet
Created: June 13, 2013 at 10:57 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Relationships | Heartbreak
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 247 views


How many times do I have to tell you
Iím sorry for the things Iíve done
Just donít feel sorry for this better hearted woman
But when I start to try to tell you
my heart sinks to the bottom of my belly
Thatís when you try to console me
But our troubleís only just begun
I tell myself too many times
Why donít I learn to love myself?
Thatís why it hurts so bad to know those words
will sting
That keep on falling from your mouth
Iím Falling
Iím Falling
Tell meÖ
Do I have the need to hurt you so
taking another piece of your heart
Such passions are these that fall apart landing in my lap
you look with a weary heart
a tear falls and a breath is taken
such passions are these that tough my lips and my sinful soul
but steal you take a dip and drink from it still
a full glass a cupful
Do I have the need to hurt for you?
Should I die a weary death and the angels take my last breath
these are moments I will not regret
Such passions are these that leave us yet
No one knows what our tow hearts have taken
taking a dip and drink from it yet
Sinful souls and a heartfelt dip we drink for it yet
and leave empty-handed and our glasses tipped loosing itís luster
itís leftover shimmer
Do I need to hate or love you?
I know we argue and I know we fight
but really can our love win this fight?
Our love is like a Knight with a sword and shield
protecting its weakened crust
Do I have the need to be broken
Iíve shattered into a million pieces
leaving you to pick up my pieces
donít think I changed my mind
for Hun..
I knew in due time you would see my broken rhyme
Do I have the need to ask?
Will my heart ever mend and be whole once again?

© By Amanda Shelton - Deep Lovers Poet ♥

Last Modified: June 15, 2013 at 12:47 am
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Author Notes

Please if spelling errors are found be nice and give me the spelling so I can fix it and learn. Thank you.

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June 15, 2013
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This is very heartfelt. There are some spelling problems but your idea comes across.

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June 14, 2013
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Iív done - I've done

Thank you hun I will fix that.

 DeepLoversPoet replied on June 14, 2013

Np any time

 dheekhaye replied on June 15, 2013

June 14, 2013
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Very well written
A great deal here, all in one poem. I believe you mean "angels" not "angles" in line 29. I loved your format!

I didn't even see that I put the e after the l thank you I will fix that.

 DeepLoversPoet replied on June 14, 2013


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