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I CRIED!!

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Author: elfqueena

Created: April 29, 2012 at 02:26 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments 114 views

I CRIED!!

I have lived past my time
now I am past the prime
and i am dieing.

I SIGH!!

Dieing from want of you
dieing from the need I feel inside
wondering if I will ever feel alive again,
feelings I put aside.

I CRY!!

You were my everything, my beloved
and I was nothing to you but I tried
but what chance had I against this pain I hide
what chance but to die, when push came to shove.

I TRIED!!

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DewmanX4
April 29, 2012

Helpful:

Very sad but have felt like this before too....

Thanks for sharing

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)

awe thank you for the read I appreciate it, hugs Elfqueena

user22767
April 29, 2012

Helpful:

A sad tale of love lost.Nice write!

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)

thank you very much hugs, Sharon

ReedyrWrytr1208
April 29, 2012

Helpful:

Sad but confusing

I could be having a derp moment but I can't tell if this is about a friend/lover dying/leaving. Also, you spelled 'dying' wrong.

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)

oh thats true lol thank you for reading it elfqueena

Celtic
April 29, 2012

Helpful:

So sad

Great write but sad.

Additional Comments (2)

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)

yeah I know lol but thats way i feel lol thank you sweetie hugs ,elfqueena

Celtic
April 29, 2012

Sorry you are sad.

Zarathustra
April 29, 2012

Helpful:

nice

See this as an important lesson that everyone goes through. 2nd time round your heart will be stronger, your mind more selective, and your self confidence strengthened.

Go see a movie, play bowling, wait a month or so, till you have forgotten him/her then go find someone else. There always plenty of contenders.

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Kassandra
April 29, 2012

Helpful:

So sad a piece

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)

thank you sweetie, Sharon

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