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I CRIED!!


Author: elfqueena
Created: April 29, 2012 at 02:26 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments 155 views

I CRIED!! 


I have lived past my time
now I am past the prime
and i am dieing.

I SIGH!!

Dieing from want of you
dieing from the need I feel inside
wondering if I will ever feel alive again,
feelings I put aside.

I CRY!!

You were my everything, my beloved
and I was nothing to you but I tried
but what chance had I against this pain I hide
what chance but to die, when push came to shove.

I TRIED!!



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DewmanX4
April 29, 2012

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Very sad but have felt like this before too....

Thanks for sharing

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)
awe thank you for the read I appreciate it, hugs Elfqueena



user22767
April 29, 2012

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A sad tale of love lost.Nice write!

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)
thank you very much hugs, Sharon



ReedyrWrytr1208
April 29, 2012

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Sad but confusing
I could be having a derp moment but I can't tell if this is about a friend/lover dying/leaving. Also, you spelled 'dying' wrong.

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)
oh thats true lol thank you for reading it elfqueena



Celtic
April 29, 2012

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So sad
Great write but sad.

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)
yeah I know lol but thats way i feel lol thank you sweetie hugs ,elfqueena


Celtic
April 29, 2012
Sorry you are sad.



Zarathustra
April 29, 2012

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nice
See this as an important lesson that everyone goes through. 2nd time round your heart will be stronger, your mind more selective, and your self confidence strengthened.

Go see a movie, play bowling, wait a month or so, till you have forgotten him/her then go find someone else. There always plenty of contenders.


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Kassandra
April 29, 2012

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:(
So sad a piece

elfqueena
April 29, 2012
(Creator)
thank you sweetie, Sharon



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