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A Poem by elfqueena


Author: elfqueena
Created: April 27, 2012 at 10:39 am
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I FEEL LIKE SH*T  

You heard that term I feel like shit warmed over
well that's me in a hand-basket,
I feel like I've been twice baked and rolled in clover
that's me, may have to bury me in a casket.

It like you woke up one morning to smell the roses
but when you smell them their all dead.
Like my nose is all stopped up and running away with itself
and that's unusual but not what usual is they say its all in my head.

I've felt worse then when I had a stroke
at least I thought I was going to die.
But I didn't, I would have felt better folks
and can't even do what I want to do..............Cry!!!.



Last Modified: April 27, 2012 at 10:52 am
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elphie
April 27, 2012
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Sorry you feel so rotten but on the bright side . I have never read a better poem about feeling rotten than you just wrote. Feel better girl . Love ya.



(Author)
awe thank you sweet ie and I feel lousy but you made me feel better , but I still feel bad hugs sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012




WhiteIndustries
April 27, 2012
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Outstanding
Sorry to hear that you aren't in a good mood I hope things get better for you, and great use of words to vent the pain.



(Author)
lol awe thank you since this morning I had changed lol Im in a better mood now lol .Thank you sweetie
Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012




user26535
April 27, 2012
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your litle words to day seem hard and cold but.......... i see a smile coming on



(Author)
awe lol I wasnt cold! ;lol it was the way I feel today like crap warmed over thank you sweetie hug, Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012




Caroline
April 27, 2012
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Awwww
sharon..I am sorry hun. I do know what you are describing here though..I have been there done that! You have us here on WN to cheer you up..We love you and keep writing dear, BW44



(Author)
awe thank you sweet bw your so kind and sweet love you Sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012




cdemetro
April 27, 2012
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It's funny because we have all fealt this way before. If you do feel this way today I hope you feel better soon.



(Author)
awe I do and thank you your sweet Hugs,Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012




user22767
April 27, 2012
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Great expression! A somewhat humorous,sarcastic write but non the less brilliant!



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awe thats so sweet I really so feel like sh*t lol hugs Sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012




Moonacre
April 27, 2012
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7/10
Shit.. too small cant read much .. ^_^



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awe I am sorry I will make it bigger hugs ,Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 27, 2012



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