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A Poem by elfqueena

Author: elfqueena
Created: April 26, 2012 at 02:54 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Despair | Heartbreak | Personal
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments and 322 views


Whispering winds
sun drop days
how have you been
since I went away.

Dew dipped strawberry's
covered in wine
what was the matter
did you forget me this time.

Honey whipped clover
with honey sweet wine
did it seem forever
when you left, your were sublime.

Roses are red and you made your bed
and now your alone instead.
Sugar is sweet but your too bitter
and now I am so in a flitter.

© elfqueena - all rights reserved

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May 24, 2012
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In Strength -
- there's Sadness

Slowly these words of yours captivate a melancholic sadness,
These eyes are crying tears of silence, on the skin is felt dryness,
These lips scream silent screams but there is only deafness,
for now I'll be dwelling in the tearful laughter of this madness,

- love your beautiful poem.

awe i wrote this after I had my stroke lol hope it was good . hugs Sharon

 elfqueena replied on December 01, 2012

April 26, 2012
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Lovely poem. Fun to read and it flows so well.

thank you so much have a good day ,Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 26, 2012

April 26, 2012
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sharon you have penned this to absolute perfection. i love it..every beautiful line! Spotlight!! Booksy

awe thank you booksi and i enjoy your to when I get to read them hugs and loves, Sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 26, 2012

April 26, 2012
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Great use of natures sweets, very sensual is parts, enjoyed it.

awe tyhank you too much , hugs Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 26, 2012

April 26, 2012
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very simple write that flowed nicely, i liked it alot..............

thank you sweetie,Elfqueean

 elfqueena replied on April 26, 2012

April 26, 2012
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The rythme is so good and the way you incorporate the strawberrys- it gives it an appeal that is alluring.Nicely done!

AWE thank you so much your to kind, hugs Sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 26, 2012

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