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Tears from My Heart


Author: DewmanX4
Created: April 24, 2012 at 09:34 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Love | Romance
Entry Stats: 4.92 Stars by 7 users with 11 comments 296 views

Tears from My Heart 
Knowing your strength is not there
My tears been flowing like rain
Now that Iím on my own again
For I got nothing left to bear

For you ripped my heart out
Deep from within my chest
And left it pumping on the floor
It hurts to see it lying there, all violable

As my heart, will take time to mend
Some how it will be for the best
For, I got to have my own respect
In time to see what is out there for me

Iím not too blind to take, the next step
But for now, Iím not meant to have a team
For I have accomplishments still to do in my life
Before, I am meant to find Mr. Right


24 Apr 2012

Roy W Bair



Last Modified: April 24, 2012 at 09:47 pm


Author Notes
Tribute to Bookworm44 's poem Rusty Teardrops

I wrote this as if I was looking thru her eyes of pain .....


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 12)

Azrielle
May 16, 2012

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fantastic imagery
emotions surge with fantastic imagery from another's perspective on loss of love that entails deep pain.. intense and dramatic write ... sl..


DewmanX4
May 16, 2012
(Creator)
thanks for reading



PoetMike
May 02, 2012

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Good work my friend. Thank for making me feel welcome here.


DewmanX4
May 02, 2012
(Creator)
thanks



user22767
April 28, 2012

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You write so clear with no hidden meanings.You words like a fresh breeze.Comforting and enjoyabe..Well done!

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Charice
April 27, 2012

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I liked this a lot
I said I would stop and review your poem without the realisation that you have reviews from two of the best reviewers. With that being said why would you want my opinion. (Lol) I absolutley found truth and relatability when reading this piece. You are a good writer and wish you the best. I like writing stuff for others, because it feels good knowing that I made them feel good through my words and I suspect that is what you have done here. Good Job with the creative juices and very thought out.
Happy Writing,
Charice


DewmanX4
April 27, 2012
(Creator)
Thanks I do honor you praises



SanExpeditus
April 26, 2012

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A True Friend
I know that Caroline must have been really touched by this poem, Roy, you've extended the hand of friendship, put yourself into her shoes and created a beautifully poetic shoulder to lean on. When hearts break, they hurt without mercy, we become shadowed in grief and loneliness, your tender hand is a star in her lonely night sky, a reminder that she is in our thoughts and hearts. Bravo, dear poet.


DewmanX4
April 26, 2012
(Creator)
Thanks for those words of encouragement .... that's all we can be is a friend and an ear if needed....



andycapped
April 26, 2012

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Very touching piece, DW. A devine tribute to a dear friend. She is one classy lady. Thanks for sharing. ~A*C*


DewmanX4
April 26, 2012
(Creator)
Yes, a very classy who needs to be swept of her feet ..

like U have Dona....


andycapped
April 26, 2012
Very true my friend. These beautiful women deserve the best a man can give. ~A*C*


DewmanX4
April 26, 2012
(Creator)
Who knows one day... YEP!


andycapped
April 26, 2012
Roy,,,I am a very lucky man. It's a once in a life time thing I have in front of me and I dont know what the hell I'm doing. I need much more luck to come my way. I feel I need to do it fast. I just saying,,,when your luck comes be prepaired. ~A*C*


DewmanX4
April 26, 2012
(Creator)
thanks.... I'm like you but I hope I not miss it... Both are classy ladies I wish I could grab ahold if her and hold on ..



BellaDonaLea
April 26, 2012

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Awe, this is a lovely tribute. I know she'll love it.
Thank you for sharing it. ur fan and friend, Dona


DewmanX4
April 26, 2012
(Creator)
Thanks it dwellled in my mind until it came out



elphie
April 25, 2012

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You're amazing. This is incredible. Each word came straight from the heart.


DewmanX4
April 26, 2012
(Creator)
Yes, it did .... thanks



Caroline
April 24, 2012

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Beautiful!
Wow this surpirses me dewey that you'd do this. It couldn't have been a better day either. thank you ! BW


DewmanX4
April 25, 2012
(Creator)
I hurt fro you and your poem touched me that much that the words just came to me ...



vansleet
April 24, 2012

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Great piece!
your words communicate ...keep writing!! great piece.


DewmanX4
April 25, 2012
(Creator)
If you like this got read Bookworm44 Rusty Teardrops where the idea came from... her hurt ....

Thanks



DavidMcCartney
April 24, 2012

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great !


DewmanX4
April 25, 2012
(Creator)
Thanks




      

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