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A Poem by DewmanX4


Author: DewmanX4
Created: April 24, 2012 at 09:34 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Love | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.92 Stars by 7 users with 11 comments and 304 views

Tears from My Heart  

Knowing your strength is not there
My tears been flowing like rain
Now that Iím on my own again
For I got nothing left to bear

For you ripped my heart out
Deep from within my chest
And left it pumping on the floor
It hurts to see it lying there, all violable

As my heart, will take time to mend
Some how it will be for the best
For, I got to have my own respect
In time to see what is out there for me

Iím not too blind to take, the next step
But for now, Iím not meant to have a team
For I have accomplishments still to do in my life
Before, I am meant to find Mr. Right


24 Apr 2012

Roy W Bair


Last Modified: April 24, 2012 at 09:47 pm
© DewmanX4 - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Tribute to Bookworm44 's poem Rusty Teardrops

I wrote this as if I was looking thru her eyes of pain .....


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 12)



Azrielle
May 16, 2012
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fantastic imagery
emotions surge with fantastic imagery from another's perspective on loss of love that entails deep pain.. intense and dramatic write ... sl..



(Author)
thanks for reading

 DewmanX4 replied on May 16, 2012




PoetMike
May 02, 2012
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Good work my friend. Thank for making me feel welcome here.



(Author)
thanks

 DewmanX4 replied on May 02, 2012




user22767
April 28, 2012
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You write so clear with no hidden meanings.You words like a fresh breeze.Comforting and enjoyabe..Well done!


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Charice
April 27, 2012
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I liked this a lot
I said I would stop and review your poem without the realisation that you have reviews from two of the best reviewers. With that being said why would you want my opinion. (Lol) I absolutley found truth and relatability when reading this piece. You are a good writer and wish you the best. I like writing stuff for others, because it feels good knowing that I made them feel good through my words and I suspect that is what you have done here. Good Job with the creative juices and very thought out.
Happy Writing,
Charice



(Author)
Thanks I do honor you praises

 DewmanX4 replied on April 27, 2012




SanExpeditus
April 26, 2012
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A True Friend
I know that Caroline must have been really touched by this poem, Roy, you've extended the hand of friendship, put yourself into her shoes and created a beautifully poetic shoulder to lean on. When hearts break, they hurt without mercy, we become shadowed in grief and loneliness, your tender hand is a star in her lonely night sky, a reminder that she is in our thoughts and hearts. Bravo, dear poet.



(Author)
Thanks for those words of encouragement .... that's all we can be is a friend and an ear if needed....

 DewmanX4 replied on April 26, 2012




andycapped
April 26, 2012
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Very touching piece, DW. A devine tribute to a dear friend. She is one classy lady. Thanks for sharing. ~A*C*



(Author)
Yes, a very classy who needs to be swept of her feet ..

like U have Dona....

 DewmanX4 replied on April 26, 2012


Very true my friend. These beautiful women deserve the best a man can give. ~A*C*

  andycapped replied on April 26, 2012


(Author)
Who knows one day... YEP!

 DewmanX4 replied on April 26, 2012


Roy,,,I am a very lucky man. It's a once in a life time thing I have in front of me and I dont know what the hell I'm doing. I need much more luck to come my way. I feel I need to do it fast. I just saying,,,when your luck comes be prepaired. ~A*C*

  andycapped replied on April 26, 2012


(Author)
thanks.... I'm like you but I hope I not miss it... Both are classy ladies I wish I could grab ahold if her and hold on ..

 DewmanX4 replied on April 26, 2012




BellaDonaLea
April 26, 2012
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Awe, this is a lovely tribute. I know she'll love it.
Thank you for sharing it. ur fan and friend, Dona



(Author)
Thanks it dwellled in my mind until it came out

 DewmanX4 replied on April 26, 2012




elphie
April 25, 2012
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You're amazing. This is incredible. Each word came straight from the heart.



(Author)
Yes, it did .... thanks

 DewmanX4 replied on April 26, 2012




Caroline
April 24, 2012
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Beautiful!
Wow this surpirses me dewey that you'd do this. It couldn't have been a better day either. thank you ! BW



(Author)
I hurt fro you and your poem touched me that much that the words just came to me ...

 DewmanX4 replied on April 25, 2012




vansleet
April 24, 2012
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Great piece!
your words communicate ...keep writing!! great piece.



(Author)
If you like this got read Bookworm44 Rusty Teardrops where the idea came from... her hurt ....

Thanks

 DewmanX4 replied on April 25, 2012




DavidMcCartney
April 24, 2012
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great !



(Author)
Thanks

 DewmanX4 replied on April 25, 2012




      

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