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A Poem by elfqueena


Author: elfqueena
Created: April 23, 2012 at 06:55 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Non Fiction | Sad | Love
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 189 views

Count on Me  



Your such a sweet friend and so I want to say
I hate that you hurt so much in every way.
If I could take the pain and throw it somewhere
then I would, because I really care.

You were there when I was in need
helping me find comfort, that's something indeed.
You were helping me deal with my pain
never worried what was your gain.

So here am I in your hour of need
holding your hand, watching you bleed.
Tears are all shed but there's plenty more a head
and gets rough before things are over and said.

So be mighty brave and don't fall apart
listen up and just follow your heart'
I love you and always will
you can count on me loving you still.


© elfqueena - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



Anushree
April 24, 2012
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good job
very sweet



(Author)
thank you sweetie

 elfqueena replied on April 24, 2012




andycapped
April 24, 2012
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I love you, my dear friend. Ty!!! <3,~Andy



(Author)
awe your welcomed love you too sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 24, 2012




parkerj
April 23, 2012
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I really enjoyed this. It was simple, sweet and straightforward, and it really felt like a friend reaching out their arms to someone they love.

Great Job



(Author)
thank you so much and It was to a sweet guy who I love dearly he' my best friend thank you ,Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 24, 2012




user22767
April 23, 2012
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Beautiful tribute to your friend



(Author)
thank you sweetie He is a dear dear friend and is hurting right now
thank you Sharon

 elfqueena replied on April 23, 2012



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