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Soul Mates


Author: sashaj1313
Created: April 23, 2012 at 02:14 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.87 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 105 views

Soul Mates 
One plus one will always equal two
And to make two, we just need me and you
The final missing puzzle piece
That can't be found with ease
It could take months, and even years
To finish building up all of your dreams
As a lonely humming heart
Is trying to find it's counterpart
Easier said than done, if at all
To try and find each other in this world
Whether it's a meeting by chance
Or sparks fly at first glance
It's hard to write a true love story
Without feeling regret and sorry
True love is hard to find
It can bring pain and make you blind
Making it seem like it does not exist
And yet the temptation is hard to resist
But miracles do happen, what not
As long as we never give up

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

sweet_t
April 23, 2012

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great one
it is nice and if have found your soul mate then you know that it is real and i found mine and he wonderful and i hope you have a great day.


sashaj1313
April 28, 2012
(Creator)
thanks.



heavenscentgirl1
April 23, 2012

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Very Nice....
...and I truly believe in Soul Mates. This was a very nice poem with words that gives us something to think about. The story line is believable and could happen to any of us at any time.....just "don't ever give up".

- heavenscentgirl1


sashaj1313
April 28, 2012
(Creator)
thanks for reading!! and for the comments1



user22767
April 23, 2012

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Very true it is hard to find and it can bring pain and make you blind to things... I consider thisan inspirational piece it says love exists you just have to find it.


sashaj1313
April 28, 2012
(Creator)
thanks for reading!



ArtNightshade
April 23, 2012

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Wow, this is really good. It kind of reminds me of this line from my favorite book: "The Secrets of the Immortal Nicholas Flamel". "The twot hat are one, one that is all." But anyways again I really really liked it. xD


sashaj1313
April 28, 2012
(Creator)
thanks so much! thank you for reading.



      

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