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A Poem by sashaj1313

Author: sashaj1313
Created: April 22, 2012 at 10:49 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Environment | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 191 views

Zombie Clouds  

Always known, always watched
Sometimes feared and never touched
Filled with mystery and rave
Arising from their deadly grave
Sprawling themselves across the sky
Like dead zombies not knowing why
Ushered by the windy spells
Washed ashore like many a shells
Awakened when the witches chanted
Giving freedom, the only wish granted
Villains that make the horses prance
Thunderous temper that makes the rain dance
Dark, intimidating and scary
Everyday haunting will vary

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

April 22, 2012
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Very Cool
Wouldn't change a thing

thanks so much. Really appreciate it.!!

 sashaj1313 replied on April 28, 2012

April 22, 2012
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This shows very good imagination - leaning more towards the darker side of clouds. Some really nice description used as well throughout the piece - this was certainly an enjoyable poem. Thanks for sharing your work.

thanks for reading. Really appreciate the comments.

 sashaj1313 replied on April 28, 2012


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