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A Poem by elfqueena

Author: PRO elfqueena
Created: April 20, 2012 at 01:09 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Dark | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 129 views


A new day dawns before us
day awakens just to yawn.
Never in a million years
has everything came but fears.

Now fear comes with a rolling thunder
now fear come with the rich that plunders.
Never daring in the wake of tomorrow
they cease to release there sorrow.

When thirst has care and hunger is done
then we will have nowhere to run.
Be careful of the face that knows
be careful of what has come may go.

This is the testaments of this life
as others become husbands and wives
We fear what is left behind
we fear whats left in the strife..

For what is behind has faded away
its gone and left for bygone days.
And tomorrow hasn't come to us as yet
so don't worry none less you soon forget..

Love is the reason
for all seasons.
But is still there
its just laid bare.

© elfqueena - all rights reserved

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April 20, 2012
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I must agree with bleaveinangels great comparisons with words. Well done.

awe thank you I appreciate that Elfqueena

  elfqueena replied on April 20, 2012

April 20, 2012
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love the way you use comparisons on words..nicely done

thank you so much for reading this, Elfqueena

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