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O MAN I GOT TO............

Author: elfqueena
Created: April 18, 2012 at 07:11 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 94 views

O MAN I GOT TO............ 

I came into chat and no one was here
I stayed a minute but this I couldn't bare.
So I left and wrote a poem or two
came back hoping it would be filled anew.

But sorry to say it was not filled
and suddenly I felt a chill.
Like death had walked across my grave
leaving a trail of nothings across the way.

Then out of the blue it suddenly filled up
and now I am happy, I am in my cups
This what I been waiting for you see
and I oops drat!! OH MAN I GOT TO PEE!!!!

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April 20, 2012

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well done I loved this write

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April 18, 2012

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great fun sharon as always..Booksie

April 18, 2012
glad you liked it sweetie Hugs sharon

April 18, 2012

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Adorable poem..It is always nice when you get responses.

April 18, 2012
lol I t was something I needed to do lmao Elfqueena thank you

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