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A Poem by elfqueena


Author: elfqueena
Created: April 17, 2012 at 12:39 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Sad | Sad
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 112 views

I AM FORGOTTEN  

I am hopeless
I am forgotten
I am dieing for love
but love is elusive.

I am that I am
and no one hears.
I am what I am
and no brother that I must dare..

I am forgotten
and none can care.
I am estranged from live
and this I can not bare.

Who do I turn to
I can not heed,
I will forsake my self
cause of my own need.

I am hopeless
I am forgotten
I am dieing for love
but love is ...elusive...............


Last Modified: April 17, 2012 at 12:42 pm
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hobopoet
April 17, 2012
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Sad
You are breaking my heart here.
Count your blessings and leave the pity party now.



(Author)
leave it to you lol I am not in a pity party lol just writing a poem hahaha thank you sweetie

 elfqueena replied on April 17, 2012




Yambrick
April 17, 2012
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good
love is elusive.



(Author)
thank you ,elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 17, 2012




user22767
April 17, 2012
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No one is truly forgotten Wonderful job!



(Author)
I thank you so much for reading my poetry, elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 17, 2012




UnwrittenDead
April 17, 2012
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good!
I really love this!! It was very good and i like the emotion



(Author)
thank you so much Elfqueena

 elfqueena replied on April 17, 2012



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