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I AM FORGOTTEN


Author: elfqueena
Created: April 17, 2012 at 12:39 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Sad | Sad
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 106 views

I AM FORGOTTEN 
I am hopeless
I am forgotten
I am dieing for love
but love is elusive.

I am that I am
and no one hears.
I am what I am
and no brother that I must dare..

I am forgotten
and none can care.
I am estranged from live
and this I can not bare.

Who do I turn to
I can not heed,
I will forsake my self
cause of my own need.

I am hopeless
I am forgotten
I am dieing for love
but love is ...elusive...............


Last Modified: April 17, 2012 at 12:42 pm


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

hobopoet
April 17, 2012

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Sad
You are breaking my heart here.
Count your blessings and leave the pity party now.

elfqueena
April 17, 2012
(Creator)
leave it to you lol I am not in a pity party lol just writing a poem hahaha thank you sweetie



Yambrick
April 17, 2012

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good
love is elusive.

elfqueena
April 17, 2012
(Creator)
thank you ,elfqueena



user22767
April 17, 2012

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No one is truly forgotten Wonderful job!

elfqueena
April 17, 2012
(Creator)
I thank you so much for reading my poetry, elfqueena



UnwrittenDead
April 17, 2012

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good!
I really love this!! It was very good and i like the emotion

elfqueena
April 17, 2012
(Creator)
thank you so much Elfqueena



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