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I THINK I WILL LIVE.

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Author: elfqueena

Created: April 04, 2012 at 02:15 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Non Fiction | Personal | Sad

Entry Stats: 4.37 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 110 views

I THINK I WILL LIVE.

Why is my heart so broken
whenever words are spoken.
Never did that bother me before
nothing ever phased me at all
until that damn stroke and then
all I want to do is cry
but really sometimes
all I want is to die.
But then I think of you
and I hope, hope that things will change
and I will see you again some day,but dang
It will never change I can see that's all to true
and now I am finished waiting for you.
I am finished waiting on someone who don't care
finished with all that crap, I want to live! And I dare
to live life to the fullest, no more crying
I'm through with you lying
I am going to live life like I use to
full of vinegar and spicy, that's what I will do.
And then I will see what awaits me
cause baby your nothing but crap you see,
and that's what will be for you with out me.

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andycapped
April 04, 2012

Helpful:

Crapman, crapman, he's crapman from this crapass land? Ok? I give up,

Cry and get it over with. Then I dare you to live a crapless life to to the fricking fullest.

Love ya, oneless crapman-woman. SL!! ~A*C*

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

I will and thats a promise but right now have other problems lol and its too sad to think of right now hugs and love you Sharon

heavenscentgirl1
April 04, 2012

Helpful:

Well said!

Oh Elfqueena, very well said but I think sometime in our lives, we all say (or at least think it) what you have so matter of factly stated in this poem. Over the years, I know I have felt exactly like you do.....but then something will occur that makes my heart love him even more.

Just wondering -- do you think that it's really that easy? I know in my case....that no matter what I say or do - it will not change the way I truly feel in my heart.

Thanks for sharing this heartfelt writing and I wish you the best in seeing your plan through.

Have a nice day my friend,
- heavenscentgirl1

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

awe no I dont , but its nice to think so any ways lol hugs elfqueena

writerpro8
April 04, 2012

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good Job great work!!! I hope u keep writing and follow your dreams.

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elfqueena
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

thank you

kioko2502
April 04, 2012

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Pretty good

I can relate to the feeling all so well, since I am going through that feeling now.

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

thank you and have a nice day Elfqueena

desiboo
April 04, 2012

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i like how you did the twist. first you were sad and crying then the next is like forget you, im gonna live my life without you. You were like im gonna be fine without you.

Additional Comments (1)

elfqueena
April 04, 2012
(Creator)

thank you very much Iappreciate your imput and that was quiet right lol hugs Elfqueena

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