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A Poem by elfqueena

Author: PRO elfqueena
Created: March 31, 2012 at 02:17 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Sad | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 364 views


If I wished upon a star bight and pretty where you are
bet my wishes won't come true
even if I wished on you.

Now I lay me down to weep
holding on to somber sleep
would you whisper my name low
maybe then I maybe wouldn't know
how to catch you when you here,
but never mind it isn't clear.

If I wished upon a star, bright and pretty where you are
bet my wishes won't come true
even if I wished on you.

Now I'm in afar away land, never ending place I am,
now all my wishes I fulfill
even down to the pretty daffodils,
not the Lily's so pure and white, but daffodils
that will seal the night.

When I wished upon a star wondering where you are
now I know a thing or two
and I'm in heaven being good,
but your not by my side, that's understood!

© elfqueena - all rights reserved

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March 31, 2012
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That was great, Sharon. Keep wishing upon them there stars, your wishes shall come true. Twinkle-Twinkle!! Love ya!! ~A*C*

awe you are sweet and i will hugs and loves baby, sharon

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