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Shooting the Moon

Author: PoetryDarling
Created: February 24, 2012 at 03:42 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Inspirational | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 230 views
Shooting the Moon 
I've made a goal to shoot for the moon
I'm going to shoot for it tonight
I'll aim my bow and arrow out the window of my bedroom
In hopes to shoot that big ball of light

So tomorrow just look towards the sky
Right before you're about to swoon
And if there's no big ball of light you'll know why
I've finally shot the moon

But if the moon is up there shining still
Just know that someday soon
That someday my dreams will be fulfilled
Of me shooting the moon


Last Modified: June 05, 2012 at 09:00 am

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Synchro
March 11, 2012

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interesting double play
best you aim at something more earthly....if you have a cupid's arrow or two left over.
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user26535
March 04, 2012

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i like it very witty but hard to go hunting from your bedroom
just a thought lol
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DemeraraLady
February 24, 2012

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emotional
great subject matter her, a bit of dramatic irony
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