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Spring's Rebirth

Author: PoetryDarling
Created: February 20, 2012 at 06:22 pm
Entry Type: Haiku, G (All)
Category: Nature | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 3.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 247 views
Spring's Rebirth 
Spring's first daffodil
unfolds long, yellow pedals
smiles at the warm sun.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

nancyaliciag
June 13, 2012

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Nice
True to form and fine use of personification with charming imagery. One small typo, check your spelling...petals. Enjoyable work!
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RaulMoreno
February 24, 2012

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Lovely
the first signs of Spring are lovely to see, I can't wait myself. Nice write.
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SinLoi
February 20, 2012

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Thanks
short and to the point. The only problem is I wanted more. very good
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