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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 25, 2006 at 05:52 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Adult | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 462 views

~Crazy Thoughts~ (Risque)  

Crazy Thoughts (risquť)

The craziest thoughts always haunt me.
Iím a desperate fool it would seem,
But when your presence is abounding,
I find myself sitting in cream.

Yes you do that to me,
Even from way over there,
I canít explain it either,
Sometimes itís just not fair.

I want to take you slowly,
Into my soft wet mouth so sweet,
And roll my tongue around your head,
Licking and sucking your stiffening meat.

Does this sound out of line?
Well Iím hoping it sort of does my dear,
Iím thinking a little bit of shock talk,
Will make you mine and make clear.

Because when you good and hard,
From oral kisses so sincerely wrought,
I want to ride your wild stallion,
Which by rights Iíve paid for and bought.

Not like some gigolo, no not at all,
But by wet low moans and groans,
And loosing my breath from your taste,
And I can tell you like it by the sound of your sexy tones.

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June 10, 2006
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what guy on their right mind wouldn't want have crazy thoughts like that too even more erotic than that though...which i hope to do someday

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June 08, 2006
you so horny

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February 25, 2006
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lol! Excellent poem!

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