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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 25, 2006 at 05:50 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 342 views

~Love To Prove~  


~Love to Prove~

Growing, Showing, Knowing, Showing;
Love, to love, to love what youíre adoring.
Iím pounding on your door of love to prove,
With every breath and every move,
Itís you Iíll love forever.
Yet how can this be?
Iíve never believed in a love that could stay true,
But look what is between me and you!
Because here we are,
One love,
One star.
Please add one thing to my notions of bliss,
Perhaps a soft slow sensuous kiss?
Iíve never been part of anything like this.
Can I have a hug a promise and a prayer?
That if weíre ever apart, youíll feel me there?
And if youíll let me Iíll feel you as well,
Please think of my eyes, my lips, and my smell.
For you are always foremost on my mind,
Your love, your words, your gaze, your shine.



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tamsgogo
August 19, 2008
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keep this good work on
If the wind were your messager, it could transport your smell and shine.Only if you know who to send it to.Did you miss love.I feel the thought and hear it in loud sound.


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June 08, 2006
who are you talking to in this poem,ivie?


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MaryJane
February 25, 2006
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Excellent poem, very beautiful. I enjoyed. Quite different also.


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Wombat10
February 25, 2006
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Very good.


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