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Naked



Author: vivididol
Created: February 12, 2012 at 11:06 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 398 views

Naked 


Dress it up
Dress it down
Put on as many layers as you please.
Dress it as a girl
When you know it is a boy.
Accessorize to make your look compleat.
Put flowers in it's hair and call it Love.
Put money in it's hand and call it Greed.
Cloak it how you will
We recognise it still;
In the end it's just naked need !


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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)

Uranusisfunny
February 23, 2012

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nice
and to the point.... if only life could be that way.... i liked your poem... and the way it points out the many ways in which humans are delusional... not that i mind delusional people... as long as they don't try to force their delusions on me... i'm sure i have my own already... nice write... no spotlight for the unenlightened... ha ha ha

vivididol
February 27, 2012
(Creator)
thank you kindly : ) no rights or wrongs; only opinions : )



lalipenz
February 13, 2012

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5
Lovely poem super write

vivididol
February 14, 2012
(Creator)
thank you : )


lalipenz
February 14, 2012
u r welcome






      

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