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A Poem by vivididol



Author: vivididol
Created: February 12, 2012 at 11:06 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 419 views

Naked  



Dress it up
Dress it down
Put on as many layers as you please.
Dress it as a girl
When you know it is a boy.
Accessorize to make your look compleat.
Put flowers in it's hair and call it Love.
Put money in it's hand and call it Greed.
Cloak it how you will
We recognise it still;
In the end it's just naked need !


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Uranusisfunny
February 23, 2012
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nice
and to the point.... if only life could be that way.... i liked your poem... and the way it points out the many ways in which humans are delusional... not that i mind delusional people... as long as they don't try to force their delusions on me... i'm sure i have my own already... nice write... no spotlight for the unenlightened... ha ha ha



(Author)
thank you kindly : ) no rights or wrongs; only opinions : )

 vivididol replied on February 27, 2012




lalipenz
February 13, 2012
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5
Lovely poem super write



(Author)
thank you : )

 vivididol replied on February 14, 2012


u r welcome

 lalipenz replied on February 14, 2012






      

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