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Uku



Author: Unicorn123
Created: February 04, 2012 at 05:08 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Sad | Love | Romance
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 141 views

Uku 
Keep strumming on that same key,
Keep telling all your love for her to me.
It's okay, I'll handle it all.
Once upon a story you should,
Take me for more than a friend who could,
Catch you when you fall.
You send all of your facts straight to the wires,
Destructing all of my heart's fires,
And you'll scream me a call.

As the keyboard keeps making its noise,
You judge all the factors of the boys,
Like you don't care.
I hide my true face in your existence to protect,
All those feelings you choose to neglect,
But life ain't fair.
Can't you just see beneath my skin,
All of the artifacts that prove what's within,
There.

Your coverings all dry and your mind undone,
You see all the things that keep you from having fun,
Just run.
You keep on the scale to cut the weight,
To possibly try to find your fate,
I'm too late.
If I can't find another who's sweet,
If you can't find another love to meet,
Can we finally speak?

Why don't you just unfold,
The black, icy, little blindfold,
Covering your eyes?
Why don't you check,
All of those things I've said, Heck,
Just take off my disguise.
We both know what is true,
We both know what it is to use,
How I really do....love you.

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Comments & Reviews

teddy
February 22, 2012

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Hey
I love this, it is really good. How I hate when guys talk to you about other girls, espically when u like them. But I totally got your poem it was wonderful
Great job, I liked it so much I am going to spotlight it.
Thanks for the great write

Your friend Teddy


Unicorn123
February 23, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you for reviewing! I know, I really just...hate it when guys don't even know that you like them...but, well, that's just how some guys are, right? heheh


teddy
March 13, 2012
You're welcome. Me too, when guys just don't see you looking and stareing at them all the time. They never think anything wrong with that, plus they are always telling you about the girl they like, it's annyoing. But one day they will see it, but it might be to late.



Northern_Lass
February 04, 2012

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Great
I love your Style a great Poem


Unicorn123
February 05, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you oh so much x#






      

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