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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: January 20, 2012 at 06:36 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 122 views

The other half was you  

I'm always only half of me
and the other half is you

oh but did it have to be
did it have to be a rule

cause now I'm sitting half complete
I just can't believe it's true

does it have to be do you have to leave
you're the half I couldn't lose


© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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dmph84
January 22, 2012
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Very enjoyable read, though short you say all you need to say very well, good work here. Kind regards Dan


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